3 Reasons to Use the Unexpected in Your Writing

3 reasons to use the unexpected

Let’s take a look at stories from our childhood.  An elephant and a pig are best friends.  A dinosaur longs to dance the ballet.  A princess saves the prince from a dragon.   What do these stories have in common?  They are unexpected!

  1. nugget and fangUnexpected friendships create interest.  In Mo Willems’s, Elephant and Piggie series, we are not only surprised that elephant and piggie are good friends, but they also have opposite personalities.  In Nugget and Fang, a shark and a minnow are unlikely friends.  We want to read about how a shark and a minnow can possibly get along. 

  2. Unexpected goals create tension.  In Brontorina, a dinosaur longs to dance, but she is too big for the ballet studio!  This unexpected goal for a dinosaur creates a great problem for the story.  In Out of My Mind, every character in the book is surprised when Melody wants to participate in an academic bowl.  They all assume that she isn’t smart enough, just because she has cerebral palsy. Her goal is unexpected and this creates tension and we want to turn the page.

  3. Unexpected plot twists surprise the reader. In Paper Bag Princess,  the princess is the hero who saves the prince and in the end chooses not to marry him.  This is the opposite of what we expect of a princess!  Artemis Fowl is a kid who wants to be a criminal mastermind and succeeds.  We do not expect a kid to be the villain, so we keep reading.

    Now it’s your turn.  Think of a character.  Give him the opposite of what you would expect.  Maybe you’re thinking of an owl who wants to sleep at night, or a pig that wants to be clean, or a little pea who hates to eat candy!

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